IELTS Writing : Writing better sentences

Here are list of few sentences which look very simple and can be improved to get higher bands. Try improving on these sentences so that you can score higher bands.

1. Living in a house is good. But living in an apartment brings problems.

2. People become independent when teachers teach them finance course.

3. Attending party is important to make interaction with people.

4. I do not want to dependent on public transport. I want to own my own car.

5. I did a lot of trips during in the past. Staying at home was boring. I preferred going out on weekend.